導(dǎo)語：奧數(shù)網(wǎng)給同學(xué)們匯總了小學(xué)六年級(jí)英語作文范文及點(diǎn)評(píng)，希望同學(xué)們的英語學(xué)習(xí)有所幫助。以下為六年級(jí)英語作文范文：

　　Planting Trees

　　It’s spring. It’s time to plant trees.

　　I want to plant a tree in our garden. Dad and Mum are very happy. They like green. Dad helps me plant the tree. First, we dig the soil. Then I put a little tree into the soil. Next I water it. I am so excited and I wait for the tree to grow. Two weeks later, my tree has some little leaves. I water it every day. Now it has lots of leaves. It grows fast. We should plant more trees. They make our world beautiful.

　　【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　小作者寫了一次植樹的經(jīng)歷，但他并沒有單純拘泥于植樹的過程。既有過程，也有感覺，能使文章打動(dòng)讀者，給人以啟發(fā)。作文的最后一段就非常好，兩句話勝似千言萬語。我們可以學(xué)習(xí)一下這種寫法。 既描述過程，又適時(shí)提自己的看法或想法的寫法，在作文中叫做“夾敘夾議”,描述過程為了提出一種思想服務(wù)，提出看法或想法使原本平實(shí)的描述有了意義。我們?cè)谝院蟮膶懽髦幸部梢栽囈辉嚒?/p>