導(dǎo)語(yǔ)：奧數(shù)網(wǎng)給同學(xué)們匯總了小學(xué)六年級(jí)英語(yǔ)作文范文及點(diǎn)評(píng)，希望同學(xué)們的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)有所幫助。以下為六年級(jí)英語(yǔ)作文范文：

　　A Post Card from John

　　Dear Sarah,

　　This post card shows you a picture from my holiday. We got Kunming on Wednesday. On the first day we visited Stone Forest. It’s very beautiful. I love it very much. On Thursday Kathy and I got lost in the city. We asked a policeman for help. He helped us find the hotel. On Friday we went to a small village. We saw folk dances and ate some fresh vegetables from the farm. We enjoyed ourselves. Last day we went shopping ane bought some presents for friends. Tomorrow we will be back home.

　　John

　　【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　寫法：這是一封明信片，按照時(shí)間順序記敘了約翰假期去昆明度假這幾天的活動(dòng)。分別記敘了游覽石林，迷路，看民族舞，購(gòu)物，買禮物等活動(dòng)。

　　時(shí)態(tài)：這篇文章由于是記敘已經(jīng)發(fā)過(guò)的事，所以大部分可以采用一般過(guò)去時(shí)來(lái)寫。

　　句型：主語(yǔ)+動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式+其他。

　　注意：描述已經(jīng)發(fā)生過(guò)的事要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，在寫這篇文章的時(shí)候要注意動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式的變化，尤其是動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式的不規(guī)則變化。沒發(fā)生過(guò)的事要用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。